I have divided my novel into five segments of roughly 20,000 words each, and at this moment I am keeping only the first segment on my computer. The other sections are stored elsewhere. I am going through it scene by scene, and I’m sad to report that very few scenes are fine the way they are. I’m finding that certain scenes need to be partially or fully rewritten, while most others need some kind of alteration. Most of this alteration involves deeping the characters and providing a little more backstory on them in order to shed light on current motives and increase reader interest. Anyway, I think (I hope!) this process will go more quickly as I progress through the sections of the book.
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You know what they say, writing is rewriting. All drafts go this way, so please don’t lose heart — even though it is certainly disheartening to realize you have your work cut out for you. It’s all just part of the gig. Remember: persistence is key!
KJ
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I don’t know whym but some of my comments aren’t getting through tonight. So if this ends up being a repeat, I apologize…
You know what they say, writing is rewriting. Please don’t lose heart — even though realizing you have your work cut out for you can certainly be disheartening. It’s why we keep writing — to make it RIGHT. And it’s just part of the gig.
Best,
KJ
http://interminablewriter.com
http://www.nanadiaries.com
K Jayne: Your first comment ended up in my spam queue. I don’t know why, but that happens sometimes, and I don’t always think to check my spam.
Yes, the revision is tedious and joyless – nothing like writing the first draft. I think it’s because the fun of discovering the story is gone. But I have too much invested to give up now.