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		<title>bedeviled by typos</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Jul 2008 03:29:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>diane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[My daughter read my short story - the one I finished last Thursday and carefully proofread before submitting &#8211; and she found a typo. Just one. Problem is, it&#8217;s the fifth word of the story.    
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>My daughter read my short story - the one I finished last Thursday and carefully proofread before submitting &#8211; and she found a typo. Just one. Problem is, it&#8217;s the fifth word of the story.   <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_confused.gif' alt=':-?' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>a proofreader who proofreads herself&#8230;</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 21:42:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>diane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8230; has a fool for an author. Isn&#8217;t that what they say?
On account of this I&#8217;m writing a second post today.
New story, written, finished, submitted. That&#8217;s SUB-MIT-TED, past tense. Gone, via e-mail to an editor. I swear, last night it looked perfect. Now, looking at it again I see three typos.
Instead of anyway, I have [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=dianegallant.wordpress.com&blog=4023014&post=50&subd=dianegallant&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>&#8230; has a fool for an author. Isn&#8217;t that what they say?</p>
<p>On account of this I&#8217;m writing a second post today.</p>
<p>New story, written, finished, submitted. That&#8217;s SUB-MIT-TED, past tense. Gone, via e-mail to an editor. I swear, last night it looked perfect. Now, looking at it again I see three typos.</p>
<p>Instead of <em>anyway</em>, I have <em>any way.</em> Okay, that one&#8217;s no biggie.</p>
<p>Instead of <em>disassemble</em>, I have <em>dissemble.</em> And THAT is a totally different word.</p>
<p>Instead of <em>he reviewed these in his mind</em>, I have <em>he reviewed in his mind these</em>.  That one comes from fooling around with the sentence a bit too much, but it sounds bad. Really bad.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s three in a story of barely over 4000 words. If I find another, I may have to poke out my eyes!</p>
<p>Is it enough for an editor to reject a story, do you think?</p>
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		<title>evaluating your own work</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 19:40:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>diane</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Editing and proofreading your own work can be hard. If you&#8217;re like me, then you see your words on the screen or on paper the way you intended to write them, and you can&#8217;t easily see the mistakes. Which means you can&#8217;t fix them.
What can be even harder is judging the literary merits of the story. Is is interesting, suspenseful, engaging? Is it original? Does [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=dianegallant.wordpress.com&blog=4023014&post=49&subd=dianegallant&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>Editing and proofreading your own work can be hard. If you&#8217;re like me, then you see your words on the screen or on paper the way you intended to write them, and you can&#8217;t easily see the mistakes. Which means you can&#8217;t fix them.</p>
<p>What can be even harder is judging the literary merits of the story. Is is interesting, suspenseful, engaging? Is it original? Does it have any discernible theme? Do the characters have depth? And so on and so on. In other words, is the story any GOOD?</p>
<p>I usually don&#8217;t know. And where to submit the work? It can feel like throwing darts in a dark room.</p>
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